Brilliant, I like ... By: KatFox13. on 02 May 12, 21:46:52 Brilliant, I like your performance :D
Were you nervous when you were up there? I noticed you're voice was soft at the beginning and then began to grow louder towards the middle and then soft towards the end. To be honest I'd probably be like that too except? I'd probably be moving around a lot.
I've kinda been ... By: KatFox13. on 18 Apr 12, 02:27:55 I've kinda been through that as well. If? you ever seen my pictures four years ago and look at me in the present you'd probably say "What happened?"
Another Awesome poem :D Great job
nice... LOVIN the ... By: NightRaven147. on 19 Apr 12, 23:22:55 nice... LOVIN the poetry :) really cool and unique
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Good to see a ... By: 19Birdy95. on 17 Apr 12, 03:58:04 Good to see a honest hardworking youtuber. Hope? you get your big break man.
Colors, when you ... By: KatFox13. on 14 Apr 12, 03:50:18 Colors, when you were younger you use them to paint fire trucks red, the sun yellow, and? the grass green but when you grow older you associate them the problems that have no answer. Well, that's what I think, Awesome poem by the way :D
That? was a very ... By: soccerviking1012. on 13 Apr 12, 08:11:04 That? was a very nice poem :)
Very? unique :)
... By: s162430. on 13 Apr 12, 03:10:08 Very? unique :)
Great work as always;
Take as much time ... By: KatFox13. on 11 Apr 12, 00:03:57 Take as much time as you need writing awesome poems like yours does? need some time :D
When you write your ... By: excusemeimdrowning. on 10 Apr 12, 22:10:39 When you write your poetry do you sit down with an idea, or does your pen? just do the talking? Amazing work btw, keep it up!
good deal.? By: gintail1. on 10 Apr 12, 22:04:01 good deal.?
Hey James you have ... By: Xervres93. on 02 Apr 12, 17:33:40 Hey James you have inspired me I am working? on my own poem thank you for the inspiration keep it up.
what is an enigma? ... By: cuzimspecial1. on 02 Apr 12, 04:02:26 what is an enigma? btw that was cool? \ /m (peace sign fail)
Your pretty hot ... By: s162430. on 31 Mar 12, 13:26:53 Your pretty hot with scruff?
Oh my? gosh.. You ... By: KyraT7. on 30 Mar 12, 06:38:31 Oh my? gosh.. You are amazing.
You found its? ... By: iamandyFEARME. on 02 May 12, 03:29:44 You found its? weakness!
I never had an ear ... By: AStaticCharacter. on 06 Apr 12, 16:24:42 I never had an ear for poetry, unless there was a beat under it, but damn, this is pretty good.? Keep it up, man!
Amazing. Simply ... By: KyraT7. on 30 Mar 12, 06:43:42 Amazing. Simply amazing.?
were you like "UGH ... By: ALoverNotAFighter37. on 28 Mar 12, 23:22:33 were you like "UGH got writers block!!!! i need to make a poem but i cant!!" *magic light bulb noise* "i got it!"?
Epic.? By: gintail1. on 28 Mar 12, 04:27:34 Epic.?
I liked? this one ... By: iamandyFEARME. on 02 May 12, 03:23:44 I liked? this one very much, it was.... Kickass...
You? are so amazing ... By: Angelsbloodytears. on 29 Mar 12, 03:25:24 You? are so amazing. I love your poetry. It's inspiring and talented. =)
Hey James you are ... By: Xervres93. on 23 Mar 12, 02:43:55 Hey James you are so talented your spoken word is so? inspiring keep it up man and good job
Very good? By: iamandyFEARME. on 02 May 12, 03:13:20 Very good?
I? agree with your ... By: marzee209. on 01 Apr 12, 22:13:17 I? agree with your sentiments! Keep writing.
Good poem again? my ... By: WAJzCripple. on 21 Mar 12, 21:19:51 Good poem again? my friend !
Good poem again? my ... By: WAJzCripple. on 21 Mar 12, 21:19:25 Good poem again? my friend !
I am glad you are ... By: Xervres93. on 21 Mar 12, 02:40:36 I am glad you are finally getting so popular hope your dreams come true? man keep it up
I definitely agree ... By: s162430. on 21 Mar 12, 01:44:32 I definitely agree here. I can easily text a person but face to? face forget it
Love your work! ... By: yankeesboy1337. on 20 Mar 12, 23:53:35 Love your work! Keep poem? alive!!!!!
Rhyming? Is Back ! ... By: Jeffrey1999ify. on 20 Mar 12, 22:45:47 Rhyming? Is Back ! :)
I know how you feel ... By: KatFox13. on 20 Mar 12, 22:22:18 I know how you feel. It seems that technology has taken away? our lives. I miss the old days where you could talk to someone in front of their face instead of having to text message them. Love the poem :D
Success.? By: drewjhyork. on 18 Mar 12, 02:47:54 Success.?
OMG? you have a ... By: ALoverNotAFighter37. on 17 Mar 12, 02:19:02 OMG? you have a twitter!!!!!!!!
i am showing this ... By: ALoverNotAFighter37. on 17 Mar 12, 01:49:29 i am showing this to everyone!! love your poetry, you have to publish? all of it someday so i can read it when ever i want!!!!
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Yeah, I looked at ... By: JamesZapfelPoetry. on 16 Mar 12, 05:01:20 Yeah, I looked at this one differently when I wrote it. I went in with an idea and just hoped for the best. Which in all honesty, that is the best way to do this whole poetry thing. Write what you think, how you feel, and see how? people react.
I love using words differently and finding different ways to use common terms and etc. Check out my other one this week, "Bent Out of Shape" for more evidence of this technique.
Haha, don't be? too ... By: JamesZapfelPoetry. on 16 Mar 12, 04:59:41 Haha, don't be? too impressed, it was just a simple YouTube built in effect. But I'm glad you liked it.
I can't explain it ... By: KatFox13. on 16 Mar 12, 03:05:40 I can't explain it but I like how you're using the terms of subjects other than in that subject. To be honest I just confused? myself :D awesome poem btw
I really liked this ... By: s162430. on 16 Mar 12, 02:46:11 I really liked this one .. I had to really listen it was different in a good way
And? editing is wicked
Next Video ?? By: Jeffrey1999ify. on 17 Mar 12, 01:11:02 Next Video ??
Stay tuned man, ... By: JamesZapfelPoetry. on 16 Mar 12, 05:03:20 Stay tuned man, rhyming will? be back. I promise.
I Loved All Your ... By: Jeffrey1999ify. on 16 Mar 12, 04:15:02 I Loved All Your Poets Except For The Ones You Have Been Putting? Up Lately . NO RHYMING Likee Tha Others ;/ iMight UNSUBSCRIBE
I have liked it and ... By: WAJzCripple. on 14 Mar 12, 21:03:33 I have liked it and subed because of hownu follow your dreams and never give up ur a good? poet and an amazing person keep it up dude ;-)
I agree man. I am ... By: JamesZapfelPoetry. on 14 Mar 12, 20:37:42 I agree man. I am not going to give up my dreams. Not now, not? ever. I think I am becoming a better writer though this channel. Being able to present my poetry verbally, I can hear the pros and cons of my own writing.
Thanks for watching dude (I'm assuming you are a dude). I post again tomorrow. :-)
Yeah, the word play ... By: JamesZapfelPoetry. on 14 Mar 12, 20:36:38 Yeah, the word play is what I try to work off of with each? one of my poems.
Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for watching.
maybe I? was kind ... By: patt1cak3. on 14 Mar 12, 11:54:38 maybe I? was kind of missing the point, but this one made me laugh because of all the geometric wordplay x) it was very punny!
I believe you are ... By: SSMSouthernFlow. on 14 Mar 12, 01:42:09 I believe you are progressing with your poetry and slowly but surely improving, keep it up and never slow down for? anybody.
Not gonna lie, im ... By: airolightning. on 22 Mar 12, 21:07:46 Not gonna lie, im not a real fan of poetry (bad english class memories) but this is real good! Keep it up, ur? real good at it!
Was good. Though ... By: itsMrNiceGuy. on 10 Mar 12, 19:28:45 Was good. Though this is? the only video I have seen so far. I think you should memorize it and put more energy into your reading. Let me know you mean what you say and say what you mean. Keep it up.
Real talk
good job ... By: castellanosja. on 10 Mar 12, 00:00:44 Real talk
good job Byron. keep up the good? work
Your going to big? ... By: acelegofreak. on 09 Mar 12, 06:22:22 Your going to big? things kid.
Reminds me of the ... By: KatFox13. on 09 Mar 12, 05:27:17 Reminds me of the bridges I've made... I like how you connect with? audience :D
I love a guy who ... By: s162430. on 09 Mar 12, 03:39:40 I love a guy who writes... It's hot
Ur inspiring keep it? up:)
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By: gintail1. on 23 May 12, 05:20:06
Keep up the good? work, I'm loving these!